Short, cute but very well constructed.
Lovely animation, the scenes transitioned well and it was done in ONE day which is just mind blowing.
thanks. glad you liked it :D
The animation lacked direction, the art style was appaliing and the animation lack fluidity. The humour, if you could call it that, was rather sub-par to a point in which it was non-existant.
The characters seems too exist in their own universe rather than too relate to each other as any form of communication between several other characters seemd to create a false relationship.
Leanr to animate, learn to establish characters realtionships and for the love of mormon Jesus learn to develop proper narrative progression.
Though I am not normally inclined towards humourous video game references this flash was actually rather amusing.
The characters were introduced well and the explanation of the FPS game with the white humanoid figure was probably the funniest aspect of the cartoon.
Very nice, I gave it a five. In future I would prefer if it wasn't just an interview process but I realise future episoides will differ from this format so it isn't really an issue.
Good luck with the series.
Richard Farkas is going to be somewhat of an investigating reporter on the Gamer Culture.. So it will be a good light hearted laugh from both sides of the board, whether you hate gamers or are one yourself.
When I introduce new characters, these interview format episodes will be developed.. Just so people can get an idea what the character is like.
Outstanding animation quality
I love the animation in this one. So heartfelt and brilliant. The flash itself had such a simple yet great storyline. I would love to see more from you :D
The humour is stale, the characters lacking in depth and the very subject matter is as lmae as a quadraplegic monky. To watch the whole production in it's entireity without interruption with undivide attention is agony.
This submission is unworthy of the front page.
YEEEAAAAAAHHH! You said it dude! "We're not worthy!"
The front page is AWESOME, and we are grateful to be on it every week here on NG!
I really liked it. The animation could've used a little work since it was basically lip-synching not really animating the body and what-not but it was well put together. I only suggest tweaking the audio though, because it seems a little inconsistant.
But brilliant job nonetheless :D
Yeah the audio was a huge problem, especially since I used myself for all the voices.
Thanks for the fave btw
That's shit is mutha fuckin tiz-ite!
damn straight j00bs
Sound- Where teh h00d At!!1!
Violence- Free fallin
Humor- steppin' on mah nikes lyk a pair of trans nigz dyks!
There was a certain charm about this flash. It was well put together:
The story of a parent and child reuniting, and in duck form.FLA of all things.
This submission had heart which strongly shone throughout the entire time. A human factor which personified in animal form.
I voted 5, and anybody who voted less should be ashamed because this truly is an epic piece of art.
It is visual magic, in a form of pre-natal orgasm oh so shining in a splendid innocence.
You know it
My new favourite submission
Wow, i was waiting for this submission for a while now. It was well worth the wait.
Not only was it better animated than your standard blockhead animation, it was funnier too. It was also a perfect5 homage to racist days of animation back when black folks were portrayed that way.
You guys rock at the SS, keep chugging away at the brilliant flash, yo.
Seemingly decent start, but improvement needed yo
well, I believe you are using a flash version Flash MX or lower, since your brush edges are rough, and are using the mouse.
You put togther the flash decently, but lot's of improvement animation wise is needed.
A tip art wise: Use the selection tool, on the tool's section you'll see the smooth/straighten option. Using smooth you'll make your edges much cleaner. Keep at it, you'll get better eventually.
Thanks... I use a tablet now, and this was done on Flash Pro 8.
This is just how I did my animations, when I was still a beginner. Thanks for the at least somewhat helpful review! :)
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